Like the intro bassline though i feel the snare needs a tiny bit of reverb and i find the quick transition at 0:12 a bit to dramatic. Also, i find the high hats not fitting to this as much as i would like, another note is once the vocals fade out at 1:00 you should make it decrescendo or fade out of the phrase, and the chords carried through most of the song could use a little more variety to it, i feel its a 4 bar phrase but maybe try an 8 bar phrase, it will make it feel more varied throughout the track, other than that its a pretty good short track, the vocal sample go with the track pretty well! keep it up!
Ya i got lazy on the line automation
great intro and execution of transitions, this is another excellent song from you, hope to see more in the future!
Thanks ^^ Glad you enjoyed :)
feels like the snare needs more reverb, and the kick, and the gritty bass is a little too heavy, other than that , nice job man!
Thanks man, I appreciate your feedback very much! Thanks for the tips, I'll use them and edit the song.
i understand your drum kit situation, but you could look for some free sample packs online! there should be some! (also thought i gave you one), apart from that this is really great! it doesnt really feel whole, maybe add more reverb to the instrument, add some arpeggios, bass and such but this is a really solid wip! keep it up! :)
wow dude... this is amazing! good luck in the knockouts!
this is really unique and cleanly done amazing job! good luck in the knock out rounds!
this sounds really good, however this is more dance than DnB
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the coconuts or what ever they are a bit too loud, the bells around a minutes are a tad bit loud as well, the filter use aroud 1:15-1:20, 1:50-2:00 felt unnecessary, and hindered the flow a little but overall its pretty good keep it up!
not exactly drum and bass, its missing the powerful drums, the ending melody feels unnatural and the drums feel a bit dry, keep trying i can see some potential in you!
sounds great!, i feel like after the bed squeaks there should be a snare or something to make a small impact, idk it might just be my mind expecting it to be there, it doesn't really take away any value of this song though, and it still is a 5 star song, keep bringing us quality remixes!
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