death2go's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wings of Jade]

holy tits my dude this is astounding! i cant even pull this off in a month, hell, i have a song ive been stuck on for 7 months now, and dont have that much to show for. you have some amazing talent and i cant wait to see what you'll do with it! on terms of criticism one thing you can improve is the snare at 2:50 - 3:10 it feels too sudden with its release, i would think a snare with a tail of sound at the end would be more effective at captivating the listeners minds with the visual of a winged being waving them off before departing up into the skies.
hope to see more from you soon!

AED4 responds:

Thanks for reviewing ^^!

I got lucky with this one, it isn't exactly the norm for me to complete a track in a day or less, unfortunately:P

Also, i can't take all credits for this, a good amount goes to my dear friend caffeine ;)

[The Lights]

getting nice chill vibes from this track, i feel like this needs a tad more sub bass still ( but im starting to think its my headphones atm so let me know if thats the case!) maybe take a little bit off the treble end on the track maybe add a tiny bit to mid-sub range, (take that with a grain of salt cuz i barely understand mixing) overall a fantastic track worthy of 5 stars! keep up the great work!

RyanBlaneyOfficial responds:

Thanks for the feedback. There's quite a lot of sub song, it could possibly be a headphones problem. If you check the Audio Spectrum on the YouTube video, there is a constant spike, and the Twitch effect only happens with sub.

[[Electro] Waxhack - Pin]

now the melody/chord/bassline sounds awesome, the main issue is the mixing, you should look into mixing and mastering more, thats thats the only thing really keeping this from being really good

keep it up WaxHack

[Please]

Like the intro bassline though i feel the snare needs a tiny bit of reverb and i find the quick transition at 0:12 a bit to dramatic. Also, i find the high hats not fitting to this as much as i would like, another note is once the vocals fade out at 1:00 you should make it decrescendo or fade out of the phrase, and the chords carried through most of the song could use a little more variety to it, i feel its a 4 bar phrase but maybe try an 8 bar phrase, it will make it feel more varied throughout the track, other than that its a pretty good short track, the vocal sample go with the track pretty well! keep it up!

Psilenth responds:

Ya i got lazy on the line automation

[Dance of a Sparrow]

great intro and execution of transitions, this is another excellent song from you, hope to see more in the future!

AED4 responds:

Thanks ^^ Glad you enjoyed :)

[Bassteroid - Intuition]

feels like the snare needs more reverb, and the kick, and the gritty bass is a little too heavy, other than that , nice job man!

Bassteroid responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate your feedback very much! Thanks for the tips, I'll use them and edit the song.